Sunday 11 October 2015

Poor punctuation

This week during Guided Reading we will be attempting to correctly punctuate a piece of speech. 

Remember! 
Put every word that was spoken inside speech marks. 
Always use a capital letter for the beginning of each sentence inside the speech marks.
Separate the direct speech from the rest of the sentence - usually with a comma.
Use a new paragraph when another person is speaking. 

EG: "Miss Ffrench have you seen my favourite green pen?" asked Mrs Robinson. 
"You mean this one?" replied Miss Ffrench, waving a green pen in the air. "I've been using it for ages - it's such a good green pen." 

Can you rewrite this piece of speech in the comments with the correct punctuation? 
The ball was out explained Miss Seleem so Sylvester needs to go to the back of the line.  OK agreed Mr Right but I still think that Keylin should also be out for answering the referee back.  Let's give her one more chance decided Miss Seleem Your call replied Mr Right as he went back to watching the football match.

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  1. "The ball was out " Explained Miss Seleem"so Sylvester needs to go to the back of the line." "OK said mr Right"But I still think that Keylinshould also be out for answering the referee back." "Let's give her one more chance" decided miss Seleem "Your call"Replied mr Right as he went back to watching the football match.

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  2. Miss Seleem explained" the ball was out" so sylvester had to go back in the line. Mr right agreed" ok, but I still think keylin should be answering the referee back. Miss Seleem decided " let's give her one more chance". Mr right replied" your call" as he went to watch the footballmach.

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  3. "The ball went out " explained Miss Seleem "so Sylvester needs to go to the back of the line." "Ok" agreed Mr Right " But I personally think that Keylin should also be out for answering back the referee." replied Mr Right "Lets give her one more chance " decieded Miss Seleem "your call" replied Mr Right as he went back to watching the football match

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  4. "The ball was out"! explained Miss Seleem so Sylvester needs to go to the back of the line. "OK agreed Mr Right but I still think that Keylin should also be out for answering the referee back". "Let's give her one more chance" decided Miss Seleem "Your call" replied Mr Right as he went back to watching the football match.

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