This week we are rewriting a fable, but with a twist. Instead of using the original characters, we have changed them to a suitable alternative. Which animals did you choose and why did you choose them?
I chose the town fox and the country fox I chose it because it has a moral and the country fox follows the town fox to the town to eat proper food but all of a sudden the humans come so the country mouse left he would rather be poor and live in peace than have everything and be in danger.
i chose the lion,mousquito and the spider and i changed it to the fly,bear and the mouse. my fable was set in a jungle . and also, the moral for my fable was just because you outsmart someone stronger than you does not mean someone else wont outsmart you.
I changed the fable, mouse and lion and I changed it to monkey and jaguar. Also I wanted it to be set in the rainforest because, mostly in my class people had set there fables underwater and I didn't want it to be the same to everybody else's fable . And I think nobody actually set there fable in the rainforest . Also I chose the jaguar because I thought that lions are quite similar to each other and I thought it was a good character for my fable
- I will change the character to a snail and grass hopper. -The snail will be the tourtos and and the grass hopper will be the rabbit. -Because the snail is slow and tourtos is slow and the grass hopper is fast at jumping and the rabbit is fast at jumping.
I chose the sharkpirahnanand octopus ,the reason I chose this is because a shark is strong but a piranha is small and stronger so a octopus can squirt ink and eat a piranha!
I chose the the town mouse and the countrty mouse. I made it into the town rabbit and the country rabbit because they kind of live the same way in the country but when I imagend the rabbit in a tucksido and thought about the mouse and it looked simmilar
I chose the lion and the mice because i really like the moral of the story because the moral is about the lion who saw a mice but the lion was thinking the mice its so little then the mice can't help any one so one day the lion was trapped by a hunting so the mice came and cut the trapped of the lion and I change to the leopard and the ant
I chose hippopotamus , piranha and shark because just because the hippopotamus is king of the water and is the strongest it doesn't mean no one can outsmart him...
I chose the lion mosquito and spider and I change it to lion rabbit and the wolf at the end the rabbit won like in the lion mosquito and spider the mosquito won .
i chose counry hedgehog and town hedgehog because people dont really see hedgehogs that much so when they read it they will be like oh yeah i forgot about hedgehogs
I chose the Monkey,Elephant and Snake because monkey's are fast and he was messing round with the elephant, the elephant got bored of it and went home.Then on monkey's way home someone put oil on a branch and he slipped into a trap...hours later snake came into the trap and stung monkey with his tail ate him up.Before the title was Mosquito,Lion and the Spider.
i did the mouse and the lion but i changed it to the mosquito and panther the same things happened but i added a variety of different vocabulary to engage the reader
I chose the town fox and the country fox I chose it because it has a moral and the country fox follows the town fox to the town to eat proper food but all of a sudden the humans come so the country mouse left he would rather be poor and live in peace than have everything and be in danger.
ReplyDeleteI choose lion and mouse and changed it to the tiger and mongoose I choose it because I like the way the witer wrote it
ReplyDeletewhat do you like about the lion and the mouse ?
Deletewhat made you like the way the writer wrote it? what made you to keep reading the text?
DeleteI'm use the lion, mosquito and the spider
ReplyDeletewhich characters did you change it to ? and did you make the moral clear in your story?
Deletewhy do you use the lion and the mosquito and the spider?
Deletei chose the lion,mousquito and the spider and i changed it to the fly,bear and the mouse. my fable was set in a jungle . and also, the moral for my fable was just because you outsmart someone stronger than you does not mean someone else wont outsmart you.
DeleteI changed the fable, mouse and lion and I changed it to monkey and jaguar. Also I wanted it to be set in the rainforest because, mostly in my class people had set there fables underwater and I didn't want it to be the same to everybody else's fable . And I think nobody actually set there fable in the rainforest . Also I chose the jaguar because I thought that lions are quite similar to each other and I thought it was a good character for my fable
ReplyDeleteI like this story because the tourtose takes a shortcut and hare decided to take a nap and the toutose won the hair
ReplyDeleteI agree shekira
DeleteI changed the fable characters to country fox and town fox. I chose these characters because foxes and mouses a similar.
ReplyDelete- I will change the character to a snail and grass hopper.
ReplyDelete-The snail will be the tourtos and and the grass hopper will be the rabbit.
-Because the snail is slow and tourtos is slow and the grass hopper is fast at jumping and the rabbit is fast at jumping.
Snail and the Clouded Leopard as the clouded leopard is fast the snail is slow
ReplyDeleteI chose the mouse and lion and I changed the characters to monkey and jaguar because I liked the idea of using rainforest animals
ReplyDeleteI chose the sharkpirahnanand octopus ,the reason I chose this is because a shark is strong but a piranha is small and stronger so a octopus can squirt ink and eat a piranha!
ReplyDeletei choose little red riding hood because it has adventure
ReplyDeleteI made up my own fable and it is called jelous Angelina and the moral is don't be jelos because it wont get you anywere.
ReplyDeleteI chose the the town mouse and the countrty mouse. I made it into the town rabbit and the country rabbit because they kind of live the same way in the country but when I imagend the rabbit in a tucksido and thought about the mouse and it looked simmilar
ReplyDeletei chose the mouse and lion and i changed the characters to cat and a dog because i liked the idea of using a fairy tale
ReplyDeletei chose the tiger spider and mosquito because they were kind of the intresting animal to me
ReplyDeleteI chose dogs because I like dogs and there are more big then a mouse
ReplyDeleteI really like mouse and the lion because of the moral.
ReplyDeleteI chose the lion and the mice because i really like the moral of the story because the moral is about the lion who saw a mice but the lion was thinking the mice its so little then the mice can't help any one so one day the lion was trapped by a hunting so the mice came and cut the trapped of the lion and I change to the leopard and the ant
ReplyDeleteI was doing the lion and the mosquito and the spider i changed it into the mocking bird the lion and the cactus.
ReplyDeleteI chose hippopotamus , piranha and shark because just because the hippopotamus is king of the water and is the strongest it doesn't mean no one can outsmart him...
ReplyDeleteI did the country mouse and town mouse and i twisted it by doing town lizard and country lizard.
ReplyDeleteI chose the lion mosquito and spider and I change it to lion rabbit and the wolf at the end the rabbit won like in the lion mosquito and spider the mosquito won .
ReplyDeletei chose counry hedgehog and town hedgehog because people dont really see hedgehogs that much so when they read it they will be like oh yeah i forgot about hedgehogs
ReplyDeleteI chose the Monkey,Elephant and Snake because monkey's are fast and he was messing round with the elephant, the elephant got bored of it and went home.Then on monkey's way home someone put oil on a branch and he slipped into a trap...hours later snake came into the trap and stung monkey with his tail ate him up.Before the title was Mosquito,Lion and the Spider.
ReplyDeletei did the mouse and the lion but i changed it to the mosquito and panther the same things happened but i added a variety of different vocabulary to engage the reader
ReplyDelete